Intro and conclusion

The intro according to the book needs to contain your attention grabber, credibility, thesis and preview to your main points. The conclusion needs to be a review of your thesis and main points. My topic is on the Cerec machine. I have in my intro what it is, a source and thesis. My main points include its history, what it does and what it will do for future dental work for offices and their patients. My conclusion will be a brief review of that and also what I wanted the audience to remember out of it. Still working on thesis statement. It seems difficult sometimes not to sound persuasive in this speech. Also working on an attention grabber, I think I want to incorporate the visual aid in the introduction and be able to show it again in the conclusion that way it is remembered better. I haven't used a power point presentation in a while so hopefully it won't be choppy and the speech will flow smoothly. I hope

Everyone does great, good luck:)